100 Word Challenge

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This term 5K have been practising for the ’100 Word Challenge’ and have been sharing their writing through their Kid Blog. It is great to see the students motivated to write and keen to give feedback to each other.  This week we will be entering our writing to the ’100 Word Challenge’ site.

The first prompt is:

… finally we can make a start…

You must use the prompt as it is written and only use 100 words making 106 altogether. Good luck 5K!

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Sizzling Starts

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Prompt: The school is made of candy.
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Before:
My mouth is watering. All I can see is my school made out of candy. Some kids have already started eating. I join in as well. I am having fairy floss pizza. It tastes delicious. When I come home Mum will hardly believe me. It is so cool!
By Jordan

After:
Crack! What was that? I arrive and see my school made of candy. Melting chocolate walls, glistening candy cane trees, a hard jawbreaker ground and little red frogs everywhere. My mouth is watering!
By Jordan

Before:
Hush hush hush! I hear the children are rushing inside. I went to go see what was going on inside. I walked in and the walls, tables, chairs, books and even the locks were made of candy.
By Sinead

After:
Crack! Pop! Bang! The school sounds like candy popping and crackling in my ear. It is making my mouth water. The melting chocolate walls are pouring into children’s mouth. The bell suddenly rings, I walk out the big wooden doors and see that the tops of the trees are all made of candy. Is this a dream?
By Sinead

Prompt: You find a time machine in the attic.
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Before:
Beep! Bop! Beep! Boop! I was at Grandma’s house and that noise went on and on. I followed the noise and it led up to the attic. It was very creepy up there. Beep! Bop! Over the chair was a big time machine.
By Sinead

After:
Tick, tock, tick, tock! I walked up the high straight stairs to the attic and see a dusty old machine. I wonder what it is. I see the buttons on top of the machine, 2 1 1 1 4. I press the button and travel back to somewhere I have never been. It must be a time machine!
By Sinead

Prompt: A talking toy.

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Before:
Ahhh! I screamed. Someone is talking,but who? Then when I turned around I screamed again. Ahhh! I could not believe my eyes. The doll looked like Chucky.
By Lindsay

After:
RATTLE! RATTLE!!! What is that? I turn around slowly slowly and walk over to the door. RATTLE! RATTLE!!! There it is again. I open the door.POP! Screaming I run off to Mum to tell her about my room. Ahhhhhhhh! We both faint!
By Lindsay